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Alan Smith rulz lol

Some points you should look into

  • Well.. First of all, congrats on figuring out how to make an article. Second, you have a lot of things to redo. For example, a whole quote from the 5th's page is completely useless. As well as detailing on Operations you once had. I can't but not to notice that some parts of your bio resembles mine, but oh well. I have a "Operations" title in my article too, instead, I'm going to make it an RP and not just say what we did. Review your thread and fix what needs attention. --Ryan Roche 06:33, 31 July 2008 (CDT)

Okay

Okay will do im also adding some more links and gonna expand it a bit Thanks for the Help Ryan :)